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2023屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)之應(yīng)用文寫作之運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康課件(共26張PPT)

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2023年廣州一模應(yīng)用文
3 作答示范及下水作文
1 考題、考情分析
2 寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
目錄
4 類似真題拓展
1
考題分析
Part one
考題命題分析
你校英文報(bào)“Teenage Life”專欄本期的主題為“Sports and Health”。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，
內(nèi)容包括：
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性；
2．你的運(yùn)動(dòng)建議。
提出問題：運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康的關(guān)系（以下兩個(gè)列點(diǎn)必須緊扣回答兩者關(guān)系）
命題特點(diǎn)：提出問題、開放作答、合理論證：鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生多角度主動(dòng)思考、深入探究，降低“死記硬背”和“機(jī)械刷題”的收益。
合理論證：運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性
開放作答：個(gè)人對(duì)運(yùn)動(dòng)注意事項(xiàng)的看法
答題分析
你校英文報(bào)“Teenage Life”專欄本期的主題為“Sports and Health”。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，
內(nèi)容包括：
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性；
2．你的運(yùn)動(dòng)建議。
論證運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性
提出運(yùn)動(dòng)注意事項(xiàng)
語(yǔ)言組織：
定義法、舉例子法、排比句、對(duì)照法、比喻句。
考情分析
你校英文報(bào)“Teenage Life”專欄本期的主題為“Sports and Health”。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文投稿，
內(nèi)容包括：
1．運(yùn)動(dòng)的重要性；
2．你的運(yùn)動(dòng)建議。
考生答題典型問題：
1. 答題結(jié)構(gòu)不均，輕“重要性”，重“建議”；
2. sports重要性部分的解釋與health無(wú)關(guān)
2
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
Part Two
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用定義法論證
Being physically active can improve your brain health, help manage weight, reduce stress, strenghthen bones and muscles, and improve your efficiency to do everyday activities.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用舉例子論證
Doing exercises regularly has numerous benefits. For example, exercises help control your weight, because to maintain weight one must burn the extra calories throught doing workout.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用排比句論證
Physical activities not only lower your risks of developing diseases and enhance your immune system, but also boost one’s level of energy and miligate mental stress.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用對(duì)比法論證
Exercise is crucial to support a healthy metabolism, while the lack of it will lead to fatigue and diseases.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用定義法給建議
Consistency is the key to reap any benefit of doing any form of exercises -- be it moderate or mild.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用排比句給建議
Without exercises, one will not know the best state of his body. Without self-discipline and efforts, one will not taste the sweet part of the process.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用對(duì)比法給建議
The benefits will not be generated in a short time. They are accumulated over a long run.
寫作要點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)
使用比喻句給建議
Rome wasn’t built in a day, so does a strong body.
3
作答示范
下水作文
Part three
作答示范：It is commonly acknowledged that sports are significant to our health. This is especially true for us teenagers.As we are still in the critical stage of growing up, doing sports can build up our bodies, thus helping us stay energetic and fit. What is also worth mentioning is the role sports play in maintaining our mental health.While working out, we may become more contented, confident and determined.
To fully enjoy these benefits, here are some tips.First, choose the sport that interests you most and suits you best. Second,find some good workout partners. That way, it's more likely that you'l exercise regularly. Lastly, exercise properly to prevent injuries.
I hope everyone will enjoy sports and live a healthy life. (122 words)
作答示范：As highschool students,we lead busy livesjuggling schoolwork and extracurricular activities It's crucial to maintain good health, both physical and mental
Having sports not only helps us stay fit andstrong, but also boosts our mood and relieves stress It's a great break from our workload that also benefits our bodies. Just find a form of physical activity that you enjoy and make it a part of your routine. Joining a school sports team or club can provide you with the necessary workout and a sense of belonging
Remember,taking care ofour bodies is just as important as taking care ofour minds. Make an effort each day, and your body and mind will thank you for it! (121 words)
Exercises play a vital role in regulating one’s health. Being physically active can improve your brain health, help manage weight, reduce stress, strenghthen bones and muscles, and improve your efficiency to do everyday activities.
Consistency is the key to reap any benefit of doing any form of exercises -- be it moderate or mild.Rome wasn’t built in a day, so does a strong body.
Zoe下水作文
Doing exercises regularly has numerous benefits. For example, exercises help control your weight, because to maintain weight one must burn the extra calories throught doing workout.Exercise is crucial to support a healthy metabolism, while the lack of it will lead to fatigue and diseases.
Without exercises, one will not know the best state of his body. Without self-discipline and efforts, one will not taste the sweet part of the process.
Zoe下水作文
4
類似真題拓展
Part Four
2022年全國(guó)甲卷
你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語(yǔ)征文比賽，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文投稿。
內(nèi)容包括：
1. 海洋的重要性；
2. 保護(hù)海洋的倡議。
應(yīng)用議論修辭中的“闡述關(guān)系”寫對(duì)海洋的重要性：
Oceans feed us with fish populations, regulate the global climate, and generate most of the oxygen we breathe. They also serve as the foundation for much of the world’s economy, from tourism to fisheries to international shipping.
Oceans feed us with fish populations, regulate the global climate, and generate most of the oxygen we breathe. They also serve as the foundation for much of the world’s economy, from tourism to fisheries to international shipping.
When it comes to the annual World’s Ocean Day, June the 6th, it is the right time to appeal to the policymakers and fishermen for the conservation of special marine habitats, for the prevention of the collapse of fish species, and for the intervention of the damage to the sea life resulted from overfishing and pollution. The improvement of the world oceans will be achieved if we are dedicated enough to this mission. (114詞)
Zoe下水作文
2021·全國(guó)乙卷
你校將舉辦英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Be smart online learners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足；
2. 提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。
應(yīng)用議論修辭中的“ 對(duì)照關(guān)系”寫分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足：
As with most learning methods, online learning also has its own set of positives and negatives. It allows learners to attend classes from any location of their choice, especially beneficial to those being restricted by geographical boundaries. Yet its biggest challenge is the struggle with focusing on the screen for long period of time without distractions.
As with most learning methods, online learning also has its own set of positives and negatives. It allows learners to attend classes from any location of their choice, especially beneficial to those being restricted by geographical boundaries. Yet its biggest challenge is the struggle with focusing on the screen for long period of time without distractions.
In order to become a smart online learner, a good solution to this would be to take plenty of breaks from the screen to refresh one’s mind and body once we have to adopt online learning.
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Zoe下水作文
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